[Bf-webcontent] English corrections for Project Gooseberry web page

[Gerard Maguire]

Indeed it does fade from one comma separated portion of text to the next.


On 11 January 2014 23:26, Niklas Keller <nicks.post.kessel at googlemail.com>wrote:

> Hi,
>
> this isn't really an mistake. These commas are used by javascript to
> fade between these phrases. Who would ever write that much commas? :o
>
> But for users with disabled javascript, this should be fixed.
>
> Regards,
> Nick
>
> Am 11.01.2014 22:25, schrieb Kacper Jednorowicz:
> > Hi,
> >
> > I'm one of the admins on this page.
> > You can contact me about it. I will correct those mistakes as soon as I
> > have some time.
> >
> > Thank you.
> > SMILE MORE -> TAKE OPPORTUNITIES | NOTHING TO LOSE
> >
> > macskeeball at gmail.com wrote:
> >
> >     I’d like to correct the many English errors on the Project
> >     Gooseberry web page (http://gooseberry.blender.org
> >     <http://gooseberry.blender.org> ), but I’m new here. Who do I need
> >     to contact to fix the web page? Thank you.
> >
> >     For example, the large text at the top currently says:
> >      > "We, will, bring together, the best of, the open source, artists
> >     & coders, to work on, their own movie, and we invite, you, to
> >     become, part of it”
> >
> >     Too many commas (mostly incorrect). How it should be:
> >
> >      > "We will bring together the best of the open source artists &
> >     coders to work on their own movie, and we invite you to become part
> >     of it.”
> >
> >     That’s one example. There are several other errors on that page.
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