[Bf-webcontent] English corrections for Project Gooseberry web page

[Ton Roosendaal]

Hi,

Kacper Jednorowicz is not known by me, nor did he ever contact me about managing websites at blender.org.

Kacper - explain yourself. I don't want people here to claim ownership or roles falsely.

-Ton-

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On 11 Jan, 2014, at 22:25, Kacper Jednorowicz wrote:

> Hi,
> 
> I'm one of the admins on this page.
> You can contact me about it. I will correct those mistakes as soon as I have some time.
> 
> Thank you.
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> 
> macskeeball at gmail.com wrote:
> I’d like to correct the many English errors on the Project Gooseberry web page ( http://gooseberry.blender.org ), but I’m new here. Who do I need to contact to fix the web page? Thank you.
> 
> For example, the large text at the top currently says:
> > "We, will, bring together, the best of, the open source, artists & coders, to work on, their own movie, and we invite, you, to become, part of it”
> 
> Too many commas (mostly incorrect). How it should be:
> 
> > "We will bring together the best of the open source artists & coders to work on their own movie, and we invite you to become part of it.”
> 
> That’s one example. There are several other errors on that page.
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