[Bf-webcontent] English corrections for Project Gooseberry web page

[Niklas Keller]

Hi,

this isn't really an mistake. These commas are used by javascript to 
fade between these phrases. Who would ever write that much commas? :o

But for users with disabled javascript, this should be fixed.

Regards,
Nick

Am 11.01.2014 22:25, schrieb Kacper Jednorowicz:
> Hi,
>
> I'm one of the admins on this page.
> You can contact me about it. I will correct those mistakes as soon as I
> have some time.
>
> Thank you.
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>
> macskeeball at gmail.com wrote:
>
>     I’d like to correct the many English errors on the Project
>     Gooseberry web page (http://gooseberry.blender.org
>     <http://gooseberry.blender.org> ), but I’m new here. Who do I need
>     to contact to fix the web page? Thank you.
>
>     For example, the large text at the top currently says:
>      > "We, will, bring together, the best of, the open source, artists
>     & coders, to work on, their own movie, and we invite, you, to
>     become, part of it”
>
>     Too many commas (mostly incorrect). How it should be:
>
>      > "We will bring together the best of the open source artists &
>     coders to work on their own movie, and we invite you to become part
>     of it.”
>
>     That’s one example. There are several other errors on that page.
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