[Bf-docboard] Typos

[Stefano Selleri]

Hi!

I'll print the suggestions and check while proofreading.

THe text has anyway been changed quite extensively, so, well
maybe some does not apply any more ;)

Stefano
> Hi Stefano
>
> These are all valid comments, but after the last time I made changes to
> CVS,
> I'm wary of making any more.
>
> I see from a recent post on http://www.blender.org that a new 2.3 Blender
> Manual is in production. Are there any sections that need to be proof
> read,
> or is it now too late?
>
> Eric
>
> on 21/11/03 6:22 pm, Alexander Ewering at blender@instinctive.de wrote:
>
>>
>> Sorry, I'm not a native English speaker, but I'm still arrogant enough
>> to
>> post my findings in the "Your first animation in 30 minutes" Chapter in
>> the documentation ;-)
>>
>> "In the following allactions" -> "From now, all actions"
>>
>>
>> "assumed that you have read the whole the chapter"
>> ->
>> "assumed that you have read the whole chapter"
>>
>>
>> "shorthand for these kind of actions."
>> ->
>> "shorthand for these kinds of actions."
>>
>>
>> "This sequence, which let you select"
>> ->
>> "This sequence, which lets you select"
>>
>>
>> "In any case, this is not a great issues"
>> ->
>> "In any case, this is not a great issue"
>>
>>
>> "Figure 10 show this sequence."
>> ->
>> "Figure 10 shows this sequence."
>>
>>
>> "Try to get to something like that shown in Figure 11."
>> ->
>> "Try to get something like what is shown in Figure 11."
>>
>>
>> "We don't care of elbows"
>> ->
>> "We don't care about elbows"
>>
>>
>> "in their original location!"
>> ->
>> "at their original location!"
>>
>>
>> " In Blender, scaling, rotating and other mesh modifications occur
>> either
>> with respect to the cursor position, or the object center or the
>> baricentrum
>> of the selected items, depending on which of the four buttons"
>>
>> -> Uhm? 3 options, but 4 buttons? We're missing "or with respect to the
>> centers of the individual objects"
>>
>>
>> "This is a rough figure at best,"
>> ->
>> "This is a rough model at best,"
>>
>> (figure is the wrong word)
>>
>>
>> "Be sure to set both the two NumButtons below to 2"
>> ->
>> "Be sure to set both of the NumButtons below to 2"
>>
>>
>> "The scale factor will now vary in discrete steps of value 0.1."
>> ->
>> "The scale factor will now vary in discrete steps of 0.1 units."
>
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