[Bf-docboard] Typos

[Eric Oberlander]

Hi Stefano

These are all valid comments, but after the last time I made changes to CVS,
I'm wary of making any more.

I see from a recent post on http://www.blender.org that a new 2.3 Blender
Manual is in production. Are there any sections that need to be proof read,
or is it now too late?

Eric

on 21/11/03 6:22 pm, Alexander Ewering at blender@instinctive.de wrote:

> 
> Sorry, I'm not a native English speaker, but I'm still arrogant enough to
> post my findings in the "Your first animation in 30 minutes" Chapter in
> the documentation ;-)
> 
> "In the following allactions" -> "From now, all actions"
> 
> 
> "assumed that you have read the whole the chapter"
> ->
> "assumed that you have read the whole chapter"
> 
> 
> "shorthand for these kind of actions."
> ->
> "shorthand for these kinds of actions."
> 
> 
> "This sequence, which let you select"
> ->
> "This sequence, which lets you select"
> 
> 
> "In any case, this is not a great issues"
> ->
> "In any case, this is not a great issue"
> 
> 
> "Figure 10 show this sequence."
> ->
> "Figure 10 shows this sequence."
> 
> 
> "Try to get to something like that shown in Figure 11."
> ->
> "Try to get something like what is shown in Figure 11."
> 
> 
> "We don't care of elbows"
> ->
> "We don't care about elbows"
> 
> 
> "in their original location!"
> ->
> "at their original location!"
> 
> 
> " In Blender, scaling, rotating and other mesh modifications occur either
> with respect to the cursor position, or the object center or the baricentrum
> of the selected items, depending on which of the four buttons"
> 
> -> Uhm? 3 options, but 4 buttons? We're missing "or with respect to the
> centers of the individual objects"
> 
> 
> "This is a rough figure at best,"
> ->
> "This is a rough model at best,"
> 
> (figure is the wrong word)
> 
> 
> "Be sure to set both the two NumButtons below to 2"
> ->
> "Be sure to set both of the NumButtons below to 2"
> 
> 
> "The scale factor will now vary in discrete steps of value 0.1."
> ->
> "The scale factor will now vary in discrete steps of 0.1 units."