[Bf-docboard] Errata 25
BALDASSARRE CESARANO
Baldassarre.Cesarano at getronics.com
Mon Aug 23 13:42:30 CEST 2004
-- glossary.xml --
Line 200: ". when" --> ". When"
Line 242: Append a dot
Line 278: Append a dot
Lines 344, 346, 576: "Blenders" --> "Blender's" (?)
Line 630: Missing item "Orthographic view"
Some item are commented but ok for me
MPEG
Normap
NTSC
PAL
Title Safe
Some other (proposal)
bone
ray tracing
scanline renderer
stucci (ok for a New word :) )
viewport
-- chapter_hotkeys.xml --
Line 374-392: start all in Upper (or lower) case after ":"
Line 478: "Or:" --> "Or" (remove ":")
Lines 516, 752, 810: a space before "These"
Line 546: append a dot.
Line 553: "key</emphasis><emphasis>position" --> "key</emphasis> <emphasis>position" (space)
Line 559: append a dot.
Line 564: "depending" --> "Depending"
Line 564: append a dot.
Line 630: "Esc" in keycap
Line 676: Append a dot
Line 690: ": the" --> ": The" (Start with Upper case)
Line 691: "since" --> "Since" (Start with Upper case)
Lines 692 and 699 (proposal): "former" --> "ex"
Line 697: ": the" --> ": The"
Line 705: "The Child Objects remain linked to the Objects." --> "The Child Objects remain linked to the Object." (the last 's')
Line 752: a space after ":"
Line 870: ": if" --> ": If"
Lines 896-901: I think this not clear (this function is NOT descripted at all in the book!)
Line 934: "Most" --> "most"
Line 952: "BKEY" in keycap
Line 961: ": The" --> ": the"
Lines 930, 1027, 1225, 1313, 1368, 1381: (Proposal) All "Edit Mode HotKeys - " + "General"/"Mesh"/"Curve"....
Line 1070: "faces, selected" --> "faces. Selected"
Line 1070: Sentence not clear!
Line 1090: "faces, selected" --> "faces. Selected"
Line 1090: append a dot
Line 1167: "situation" --> "situations" (?)
Line 1172: Append a dot
Lines 1182-8: Start with upper case (see other items)
Lines 1247, 1252, 1257, 1287: "Bezier" --> "Bézier" (e acute)
Lines 1295-6: see other menù format (line 1199...): Item (in literal) + ":" + Description starting in upper case.
Line 1295: A "vertex" can't be subdivide! Replace it with "curve segment" or "edge"...(?)
Lines 1326-8: FKEY... is for Curve NOT Surface! (bad cut/paste?)
Lines 1351-3: see other menù format (line 1199...): Item (in literal) + ":" + Description starting in upper case.
Line 1388, 1400, 1404, 1416: Append a dot
Lines 1486-95: see other menù format (line 1199...): Item (in literal) + ":" + Description starting in upper case.
-- section_info_window.xml --
Line 304: "it the mouse" --> "if the mouse"
Lines 306, 308-10: append a dot
Line 361: Close with ")" and append a dot
Line 400: Append a dot
Lines 419-21: "applyto" --> "apply to" (?)
Line 428: Close with ")"
Lines 504-5, 508-10: Append a dot
-- section_file_window.xml --
Lines 45-7: Time + data
Line 112: Append a dot
Line 144: Append ":"
Line 235: "F1" and "F2" in keycap
Line 260: "Select" un lower case
Line 267: "FileWindowperforming" --> "FileWindow performing"
Lines 245, 251, 257: in keycap (see other items)
Line 225: Append a dot
Lines 339, 347: remove "Unix"
Line 347: "definde" --> "defined"
Line 348: Rempve space after "$IMAGEEDITOR"
Line 444: remove (???)
Lines 450, 456, 462, 468, 474: Append a dot
Line 462: Remove ":"
Line 503: "RightMouse" --> RMB in keycap
Line 504: "LeftMouse" --> LMB in keycap
Line 511: "FKEY" in keycap
Line 521: "LeftMouse" --> LMB in keycap
Line 527: Please review phrase
Baldo
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