[Bf-docboard] Errata 23
BALDASSARRE CESARANO
bf-docboard@blender.org
Mon, 2 Aug 2004 00:28:47 +0200
Hi to all,
I have a problem with CVS connection, some errata can be resolved!
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-- section_uv_unwrapping.xml --
Line 5: "relevant" --> "Relevant" (see other sections)
Line 5: "BLender" --> "Blender" ("L")
Lines 10-11: repetition of "Blender"
Line 14: append a dot.
Line 16: not translatable!
Line 67: append a dot.
Line 81: "easily manually" ????? "easily by hand" ?
Line 118: "editor" ---> "Editor"
Line 114: "mapped" ?? "map"
Line 172: "editor" ---> "Editor"
Line 174: "editor" ---> "Editor"
Line 204-205: Please change the phrase... too much "stitch..." or =
change on line 205: "the stitched vertex." with "the vertexof overlapped =
faces." (?)
Line 193, 208, 271: Same caption (?)
Line 262: 'From Window' --> ' "From Window" ' (Quote)
Line 263: "ret" ---> "rest"
All figures formatis marked as "JPG" instead of "PNG"
-- section_uv_textures.xml --
Line 3: "relevant" --> "Relevant" (see other sections)
Line 3: "BLender" --> "Blender" ("L")
Line 56: Start with uppercase
Line 63: remove first space and start with uppercase
Line 75: "FaceSelect" --> "Face Select"
"UV face select"---> "UV Face Select" and in literal
Line 80: "FaceSelect" --> "UV Face Select"
Line 93: "Draw Edges" and "Draw Faces" in literal
See lines 94 and 95 too
Line 95: "drwan" ---> "drawn"
Line 98: "AKEY" in keycap
Line 100: "RightMouse" --> "RMB" and in Keycap
Line 109: "RMB" and in Keycap
Line 130: Please change... browsing don't assign. Only loading!
Line 169: "Coordinates" --> "coordinates" (see other items)
Line 182: The figure in line 149 don't show "LSCM"
Line 188: "panel" --> "Panel"
Line 226: "Lock" in literal
Line 233: "ALT+HKEY" --> "ALT-HKEY"
Line 241: "'Stick UVs to Mesh Vertex'" in literal or emphasis
Line 244: "CTRLKEY" ---> "CTRL"
Line 247: "'Stick Local UVs to Mesh Vertex'" in literal or emphasis
Line 262: "editor" --> "Editor"
Line 267-268: Please change the phrase... is not clear if is a tool for =
selection or de-selection and... a face can't be partially selected!
Line 269: "Alt L" --> "ALT-L" and in keycap
Line 276: "hotkey is L." --> "hotkey is <keycap>LKEY</keycap>."
Line 278: "mode --> "Mode"
"editor" --> "Editor"
Line 291: "Weld" in literal=20
Line 294: Append a dot.
Line 310: Where is the "first" button in previous figure? (next to last =
and the last)
Line 336: First char in upper case ("V") and append a dot
Line 361: "ie" --> "i.e." (?)
Line 365-366: remove commas ","
Line 372: "editor" --> "Editor"
Line 374: Please mark "Select Linked" emphasis or literal (?)
Line 379: "UV's" --> "UVs" (?)
"editor" --> "Editor"
Line 382: "editor" --> "Editor"
Line 384: "<keycap>E</keycap>" --> "<keycap>EKEY</keycap>"
Line 385: "editor" --> "Editor"
Line 386: "editor" --> "Editor"
-- section_blender_radiosity.xml --
Line 73: add a dot before "These" (see other items)
Line 186 and 194: add a dot after first word (see other lists)
-- section_radiosity_quickstart.xml --
Line 75: add a dot
Line 82: remove "()" around link
Line 158: "panel" --> "Panel"
-- section_radiosity_step_by_step.xml --
Line 211 and 250: add a dot (see other items)
-- section_radiosity_juicy.xml --
Line 30: remove dot
Lines: 371, 374, 397 refer to a figure -a,-b,-c but the figure defined =
in line 384 (PartR/radiosity/gfx/screen18.png) is NOT marked in a, b, c.
-- section_effects_particles.xml --
Line 102: append a dot
Line 424: "Alpha" and "Halo Size" in literal (?)
Line 585-586: remove "(" and ")" around figure reference
Line 666: add a space near "Panel"
Line 862: "step" --> "Step" and in literal
Line 884: "Halosize" in literal
Line 903: "colorband" in literal (?)
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-- section_dupliverts.xml --
Line 23: "Greek" --> "greek" (adjective ?)
Line 183: add a space near "Panel"
Line 193: "TrackX,Y,Z" --> "TrackX, Y, Z" (spaces)
Line 194: "UpX,Y,Z"--> "UpX, Y, Z" (spaces)
Line 222: "(actually to exist at all))" --> " - actually to exist at =
all)" (dash
instead double bracket)
Line 228: "UpX,Y,Z"--> "UpX, Y, Z" (spaces)
Line 229: "TrackX,Y,Z" --> "TrackX, Y, Z" (spaces)
-- section_dupliframes.xml --
Line 33: append a dot
Line 78: "Curve Follow" in literal (?)
Line 110: "TrackX,Y,Z" --> "TrackX, Y, Z" (spaces)
Line 111: "UpX,Y,Z"--> "UpX, Y, Z" (spaces)
Line 146: "numebr" --> "number"
Lines 153, 169 and 273: same caption!!!
Line 169: Caption is wrong (See book). Must be: "Making Dupl's Real"
Line 237: Caption is wrong (See book). Must be: "Skinning the link" =
(Note is the same as previous in the text!)
Line 271: "normalpaernt" --> "normal parent"
Line 300: "With" ---> "with"
Line 324: "Axis" in literal
Line 344: "Extrapolation Mode" in literal
Lines 456 and 458: "DupliFrames" in literal
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-- section_modelling_with_lattices.xml --
Line 18: remove space before "?"=20
Line 46: remove space before "?"=20
Line 52: "U,V,W"--> "U, V, W" (spaces)
Line 56: "U,V,W"--> "U, V, W" (spaces)
Line 86: remove space before "?"=20
Line 226: a space before "Panel"
Line 250: remove space and "."
Line 190: remove space before "!"
-- chapter_volumetrics.xml --
Line 100: "COntext" --> "Context"
Line 116: Figure reference in bracket "(...)"
Lines 129 and 148: same caption!
Line 273: after "Orco" add "(ORiginal COordinate)"
-- chapter_sequence.xml --
Line 40: "animation" --> "Animation"
Line 46: "NUM 0" --> "NUM0"
Line 47:remove dot
Line 48: Figure reference into "(" and ")"
Line 97: append ".." (see line 106)
Line 106: "And" --> "...and" (see line 97)
Line 166: "SHIFT F8" --> "SHIFT-F8"
Line 245: append a dot
Line 295: "DispView" in literal (?)
Line 382: Figure reference into "(" and ")"
Line 397: "animation" --> "Animation"
Line 438: Remove dot
Line 468: Append a dot
Line 542: "animation" --> "Animation"
Line 553: "NUM 1" --> "NUM1"
Line 568: "NUM 3" --> "NUM3"
Line 582: remove first dot
Line 697: remove "Figure "
Line 720: remove "Figure "
Line 731: "sequence" --> "Sequence"
Line 797: Remove dot
Line 824: "Object COntext(F7). In" --> "Object Context (F7) in" (1-"o" =
lower case, 2-space at end, 3-dot removed, 4-"i" lcase)
Line 850: ... click on a key???
Line 890: remove "Figure "
Line 939: "sequence" --> "Sequence"
Line 1028: remove "Figure "
Line 1210: "you" --> "You"
Line 1210: "Add" --> "add"
Line 1233: "sequence editor" --> "Sequence Editor"
Lines 1233-1234: Please change text: "sequence editor"..."sequence =
editor"
Line 1238-1239: "MIXDOWN button in the Sequencer button" (?) =
(button...button?)
-- section_python_example.xml --
Line 244: Append a dot
Line 259: add a space before "Populates" (see also lines 269, 273, 281)
Line 328: start with uppercase "finally" ---> "Finally"
-- section_python_scripts.xml --
Line 2: remove dot
Lines 11-16: Same text in chapter_python.xml
Line 16: "blender" --> "Blender"
Line 16: web url, see org text in chapter_python.xml
Line 22: Start with Uppercase
Append a dot: 104, 111, 160, 209, 216, 223, 237, 251, 265, 272, 293, =
345
First UpperCase: 160
-- chapter_installation.xml --
Line 97: "Stat" --> "Start"
Lines 213, 233, 248, 268, : "blenderpublisher" ---> "blender" (???)
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Ciao
Baldo