[Bf-docboard-svn] bf-manual: [8342] trunk/blender_docs/manual/editors/video_sequencer: Cleanup Wording in new vse docs

[Aaron Carlisle]

Revision: 8342
          https://developer.blender.org/rBM8342
Author:   Blendify
Date:     2021-08-23 23:02:33 +0200 (Mon, 23 Aug 2021)
Log Message:
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Cleanup Wording in new vse docs

Modified Paths:
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    trunk/blender_docs/manual/editors/video_sequencer/introduction.rst
    trunk/blender_docs/manual/editors/video_sequencer/preview/index.rst
    trunk/blender_docs/manual/editors/video_sequencer/sequencer/display.rst
    trunk/blender_docs/manual/editors/video_sequencer/sequencer/index.rst

Modified: trunk/blender_docs/manual/editors/video_sequencer/introduction.rst
===================================================================
--- trunk/blender_docs/manual/editors/video_sequencer/introduction.rst	2021-08-22 03:52:28 UTC (rev 8341)
+++ trunk/blender_docs/manual/editors/video_sequencer/introduction.rst	2021-08-23 21:02:33 UTC (rev 8342)
@@ -18,13 +18,14 @@
 Editor Layout
 =============
 
-The VSE is composed of multiple areas (see figure 1). They are described in more detail in the next sections.
-Figure 1 shows the combined view *Sequencer/Preview*. You can select this view with the View Type selector.
-This view can contain the following areas:
+The Video Sequencer is composed of multiple regions (see figure 1).
+They are described in more detail in the next sections.
+Figure 1 shows the combined *Sequencer & Preview* view type.
+This view can be broken up into the following regions:
 
 .. figure:: /images/editors_vse_overview.svg
    
-   Figure 1: Sequence Editor shown in the Sequencer & Preview view.
+   Figure 1: Sequence Editor shown in the Sequencer & Preview view type.
    
    Header (red), Preview (Yellow), Sequencer (blue), Properties (Grey),
    Panels & Tabs (Yellow), Toolbar (Purple)
@@ -49,7 +50,8 @@
 View Types
 ==========
 
-The Video Sequencer has three view types which can be changed with the View Type menu (see figure 1; top left).
+The Video Sequencer has three view types which can be
+changed with the View Type menu (see figure 1; top left).
 
 .. figure:: /images/editors_vse_view_types.svg
    

Modified: trunk/blender_docs/manual/editors/video_sequencer/preview/index.rst
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--- trunk/blender_docs/manual/editors/video_sequencer/preview/index.rst	2021-08-22 03:52:28 UTC (rev 8341)
+++ trunk/blender_docs/manual/editors/video_sequencer/preview/index.rst	2021-08-23 21:02:33 UTC (rev 8342)
@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@
 Preview
 *******
 
-The Preview contains two areas (see figure 1), the *header* is show
-in a yellow outline with the black *Preview window* (red outline) underneath.
-This Preview window has no fixed dimensions; you can zoom in or move indefinitely.
+The Preview contains two regions (see figure 1), the Header is shown
+in a yellow outline with the *Preview* (red outline) underneath.
+This Preview has no fixed dimensions; you can zoom in or move indefinitely.
 However, in figure 1 you see a checkered area (green outline).
 This preview has the aspect ratio of the Project Dimensions; e.g. 1920 x 1080 pixels in figure 1.
 But, because the source strip could be scaled in a different resolution,

Modified: trunk/blender_docs/manual/editors/video_sequencer/sequencer/display.rst
===================================================================
--- trunk/blender_docs/manual/editors/video_sequencer/sequencer/display.rst	2021-08-22 03:52:28 UTC (rev 8341)
+++ trunk/blender_docs/manual/editors/video_sequencer/sequencer/display.rst	2021-08-23 21:02:33 UTC (rev 8342)
@@ -43,5 +43,6 @@
 
    :Waveform Off: Disable waveforms for all strips.
    :Waveform On: Enable waveforms for all strips.
-   :Use Strip Option: Set waveform per strip configured with
+   :Use Strip Option:
+      Set waveform per strip configured with
       :ref:`Display Waveform <bpy.types.SoundSequence.show_waveform>`.

Modified: trunk/blender_docs/manual/editors/video_sequencer/sequencer/index.rst
===================================================================
--- trunk/blender_docs/manual/editors/video_sequencer/sequencer/index.rst	2021-08-22 03:52:28 UTC (rev 8341)
+++ trunk/blender_docs/manual/editors/video_sequencer/sequencer/index.rst	2021-08-23 21:02:33 UTC (rev 8342)
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
 
    Figure 1: Sequencer and components
    
-Although the Sidebar and Toolbar belong to the Timeline area, they are discussed in a separate subsection.
+Although the Sidebar and Toolbar belong to the Timeline area, they are discussed in a separate section.
 
 .. toctree::
    :maxdepth: 2