[Bf-docboard] [developer.blender.org] [Requested Changes To] D1048: T43410 Document Mesh->Transform->Bend Tool

[Wayne Campbell]

Good suggestions.   Thanks for the feedback.

Wayne

On Sun, Feb 1, 2015 at 7:07 AM, Greg Zaal <noreply at developer.blender.org>
wrote:

> gregzaal (Greg Zaal) requested changes to this revision.
> gregzaal (Greg Zaal) added a comment.
> This revision now requires changes to proceed.
>
> Added some very nit-picky comments in-line
>
> INLINE COMMENTS
>   manual/modeling/meshes/editing/deforming/bend.rst:1 Always add overline
> for page titles. Should be:
>
>   ```
>   ****
>   Bend
>   ****
>   ```
>   manual/modeling/meshes/editing/deforming/bend.rst:13 It's a bit
> redundant to have a "Description" header - we assume that the text
> immediately at the top is a description of the feature.
>   manual/modeling/meshes/editing/deforming/bend.rst:20 Lines should be a
> maximum of 120 characters long. Most decent text editors can show you the
> column number (usually in the bottom corner) or even display a ruler at the
> 120 character mark.
>   manual/modeling/meshes/editing/deforming/bend.rst:24 No need to make
> this italic, best keep it consistent with the rest of the docs.
>   manual/modeling/meshes/editing/deforming/bend.rst:36 It's better to
> avoid writing these sort of mini tutorials - this section could be placed
> above in the description and rephrased shorter to something like: "Common
> usage is to align the view and place the cursor at the pivot of the arc,
> then bend it... this can be useful for..."
>   manual/modeling/meshes/editing/deforming/bend.rst:48 There's nothing
> wrong with this, but just to note that we can use a special 'hint'
> directive that has some fancy formatting:
>
>
>   ```
>   .. hint:: You can turn the bend angle through multiple rotations
> potentially forming a spiral shape.
>   ```
>
> REVISION DETAIL
>   https://developer.blender.org/D1048
>
> To: wacampbell, gregzaal
> Cc: micah_denn, quollism, wacampbell, campbellbarton
>
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