[Uni-verse] Press release

[Peter Becker, II]

Hi

enclosed a suggestion for a revised press release

Peter


Gert Svensson wrote:

>
> Dear Tapio,
>
> thanks for the comments. See below.
>
> Best Regards
> Gert
> Tapio Lokki wrote:
>
>> On Wed, 15 Nov 2006, Gert Svensson wrote:
>>
>>> Dear Friends,
>>> this is the first version of a press release we could bring to the 
>>> IST event.
>>> I'm working with the KTH press service for a more popular Swedish 
>>> version (and possibly English as well).
>>> Please comment!
>>
>>
>> Dear all,
>>
>> The press release looks nice. However, a few comments:
>>
>> 1. I'd like to change the title so that it does not contain word 
>> "breakthrough", since with my academic glasses I see it too strong. 
>> How about "Novel distributed acoustic simulation tools for 
>> architecture and games".
>
> I can understand your concern but in press releases it is "normal" to 
> exaggerate. Has something similar been done before?
>
>>
>> 2. When audio waves bend around obstacles the phenomenon is called 
>> diffraction, not refraction (as now in the end of 3. paragraph).
>
> Sorry, my fault  So the statement will be correct if I change 
> refraction to diffraction?
>
>>
>> 3. In the end, list of project partners: "Helsinki Technical 
>> University" does not exist, instead "Helsinki University of 
>> Technology" has been our name since 1908 :-)
>
> Sorry again. I have changed that.
>
> An updated version is attached.
>
>
> Best Regards
> Gert
>
>------------------------------------------------------------------------
>
>_______________________________________________
>Uni-verse mailing list
>Uni-verse at projects.blender.org
>http://projects.blender.org/mailman/listinfo/uni-verse
>  
>
-------------- next part --------------
A non-text attachment was scrubbed...
Name: IST-event-press-release PB.doc
Type: application/msword
Size: 165888 bytes
Desc: not available
Url : http://projects.blender.org/mailman/private/uni-verse/attachments/20061116/f5c97531/IST-event-press-releasePB-0001.doc