[Bf-docboard] Errata 34
Cesarano, Baldassarre
Baldassarre.Cesarano at getronics.com
Fri Sep 10 11:39:07 CEST 2004
-- appendix_licenses.xml --
Line 26: "This Style Guide" ?? (Style?)
Line 137: append a dot
Line 155: "Herebelow" --> "Here below"
Line 641: missing "END OF TERMS AND CONDITIONS"
-- appendix_documentation_project.xml --
Line 22: "blender" --> "Blender"
-- section_docbook_learning.xml --
Line 8: remove ", available on-line"
Lines 106, 107, 110: append a dot
Lines 111-2: start comment with uppercase
Line 137: Insert a dot before " For"
Line 141: first "SYSTEM" in computeroutput or emphasys or...?
Line 192: "tell a reader" is correct ?
Line 193-5: ... some punctuation please!
Line 217: "Manual documentation" one superfluous
Line 260: Please confirm the phrase ("the reader"..."they")
Line 340: "Failure to include this slash" --> "Missing this slash" ???
Line 535: Please review ("mentioned"..."mentioned"
Line 610: "warning" --> "Warning" (see next "Note")
-- world_ambient_occlusion.xml --
(lines can be shifted: I have correte version 1.3 first)
Line 28: Please verify (not a pixel (2D on the screen) but a point (3D)!)
Line 34: "on the" --> "on, the" (comma)
Line 73: Remove space before "The"
Line 123: "AngMap" ??? Where is described!
Line 131: "Horizon" --> "horizon"
Lines 131-3: all colors in same case! See "orange" in line 133!
Line 151: "Slider" --> "slider" ?
Line 152: "a hemisphere" --> "the hemisphere" ???
Line 153: remove last dot
Line 169: "Octree" ???? Where is the description?????
Line 170: transform in link "Rendering Chapter"
Baldo
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