[Bf-docboard] Some other Errata: 5

BALDASSARRE CESARANO bf-docboard@blender.org
Wed, 23 Jun 2004 14:08:53 +0200


/PartEX/texseq_plugins/en/chapter_tex_seq_plugins.xml:616:17: character =
< is the first character of a delimiter but occurred as data
	""
616:   "if ((pos[0] <=3D cast->mortar) || (pos[1] <=3D cast->mortar) ||"	=
---> "if ((pos[0] &lt;=3D cast->mortar) || (pos[1] &lt;=3D =
cast-&gt;mortar) ||"
617:   "(pos[2] <=3D cast->mortar)) {"					---> "(pos[2] &lt;=3D =
cast-&gt;mortar)) {"



/PartBE/yafray/en/chapter_yafray.xml:229:74: reference not terminated by =
refc delimiter

"<keycap>&lt;shader </keycap>type =3D "generic" name =3D =
"Default"<keycap>&gt</keycap>;" -- > "<keycap>&lt;shader </keycap>type =
=3D "generic" name =3D "Default"<keycap>&gt;</keycap>;" (; after last =
&gt



-- section_mesh_modeling_objects.xml --
	first row: "access the 'add'-menu by" --> "access the 'Add'-menu by"
	First note: "If you spec a six" --> "If you specify a six"
	Caption of figure 4 without full stop (".")
	After fig. 4 "Global, local, or viewing reference"	--1-> "Global, =
Local, or Viewing reference"
								--2-> "global, local, or viewing reference"
	after fig 4, 2 par.: "All operations in EditMode ultimately =
performed"--> "All operations in EditMode are ultimately performed"
	...same paragraph	"CTRL-ALT-MMB" ----> 	"CTRL-ALT-RMB"
	Caption of figure 5 "Edit Buttons" ---> "Edit Context."
	Caption of figure 6 without full stop (".")
	-- Mesh Undo --
		?? "As for Blender" or "As of Blender " ???
	Caption of figure 7 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 8 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 9 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 10 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 11 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 14 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 17 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 19 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 20 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 22  "window" --> "context"
	Caption of figure 25 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 26 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 27 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 28 without full stop (".")

	Numbering of item 9 (after figure 29 must restart item number 8 ...(Why =
not ??? style)

	Caption of figure 29 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 30 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 31 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 32 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 33 without full stop (".")

	In file section_mesh_modeling_spin.xml, Row 88: "the profile.&nbsp; =
You'll" --> "the profile. You'll"

	Caption of figure 36 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 37 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 39 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 41 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 42 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 43 without full stop (".")
	in file section_mesh_modeling_spin.xml, Row 300: "rotation.&nbsp; In" =
--> "rotation. In"
	in file section_mesh_modeling_spin.xml, Row 326: "VERTICES.&nbsp; " --> =
"VERTICES. "
	Caption of figure 45 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 49 without full stop (".")

	Caption of figure 51 incomplete: "Noise application process"---> "Noise =
application process. From top left to bottom right: Plane with texture, =
subdivided plane, "Noise" button hit 2, 4, 6 and 8 times."

	Caption of figure 52 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 53 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 54 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 55 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 56 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 57 without full stop (".")
	--Caption Fig 59: "Rectangular", --> "rectangular" ("r" lower case
	Caption of figure 60 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 62 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 68 without full stop (".")

-----------------
-- section_curves.xml --
	Caption of figure 1 without full stop (".")
	After fig. 4: "Figure 4 Shows..." ---> "Figure 4 shows..."
	Caption of figure 5 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 7 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 8 without full stop (".")
--section_surfaces.xml--
	After fig. 20: "...the pre- sets..." ---> "...the pre-sets..."
	Caption of figure 21 without full stop (".")
	Caption of figure 22 without full stop (".")
--section_text.xml--
	second paragraph: "keyboard In EditMode" --> "keyboard in EditMode"
	Caption of figure 24 without full stop (".")


--section_materials_in_practice.xml--
	Second paragraph: after an inline figure a space (" ") is timely!


--section_textures.xml--
	ALL Caption figures without full stop (".")
	Two paragraphs before fig. 15: "...(and similar panes..." ---> "...(and =
similar panels..."



-- section_materials_special.xml --
	Caption ov figure 43 is wrong: "Halo results" --> "Dot matrix image =
texture."
	Paragraph after fig. 44: bracket not closed "(You could..."


-- Environment Maps  --
	5th paragraph: "reachesthe surface" --> "reaches the surface "


-- Hollow Glass --
	Figure 61 and previous paragraph: "...then move the Alpha material =
slider to 0.0"... but in the figure Alpha is set to 0.158 (paper book =
too)

-- Editing UV coordinates --
	Figure 68: "vertex colors modulate texture" --> "Vertex colors modulate =
texture." (First word Uppercase + final dot)


-- section_ipocurves.xml 1.3 ---
	4th paragraph: "in the the Curve" -- > "in the Curve"

-- section_pathanim.xml --
	"THe Former is..." --> "The Former is..."

-- section_vk.xml --
	Where is ..."The Slurph button in the Animation buttons..." ???
-- section_rvk.xml --
	After Figure 4, before "This stores ..." missing a dot or "T" --> "t"

-- chapter_character_animation.xml --
	Row 53: "Auto Keyframe on<literal>Action" ----> "Auto Keyframe on =
<literal>Action" (space after on)
	Row 150: "<keycap>SPACE</keycap>&gt;&gt;AddDgt;" ---> =
"<keycap>SPACE</keycap>&gt;&gt;Add&gt;"

	-- Parent to Armature Object --
	Before "Figure 6. Vertex Groups": "...it is made the armature-child of =
an armature..." ---> "...it is made the child of an armature..."
	Row 525 of xml: "to the <literal>IK</literal>are" --> "to the =
<literal>IK</literal> are" (space before "are")
	Row 732 of xml: "or best results, be sure..." ---> "For best results, =
be sure..." (F initial)
	Row 888/9 of xml: "...to a bone\n In the..." ---> "...to a bone\n in =
the..." (i lowercase)
	Row 1070 of xml: full stop (".") at end missing.





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