[Bf-docboard] Errata 9
BALDASSARRE CESARANO
bf-docboard@blender.org
Wed, 7 Jul 2004 09:47:28 +0200
-- section_output_formats.xml ---=20
At end: AVI Raw...AVI Jpeg...AVI Codec... ? "QuickTime - saves a =
QuickTime animation"? Missing ??
-- section_depth_of_focus.xml --
Name of xml is "rendering_depth_of_field", Name of section "Depth of =
Field" ???=20
Paragraph after figure 26: "(CTRL+P) THe " ---> "(CTRL-P). The " (3 =
errors: "-", ".", "h")
next paragraph: "CTRL+LMB" --> "CTRL-LMB"
-- section_video.xml --
First paragraph: "on the internet" ---> "on the Internet"
after formulas: "the Human eye" ---> "the human eye"
same paragraph: "...the former is sent with more bits than the two =
latter." ---> Please change the phrase! "the former??", "the two =
latter???"
-- section_blender_radiosity.xml --
Line 94, Item "Progressive Refinement": "Patchnow having" --> "Patch =
now having" (space)
-- section_radiosity_quickstart.xml --
Caption of figure 3 without full stop (".")
Cfr Line 30 and 32: <'Emit'> --- <"Emit"> (single or double )
line 80-81 insert a space after in line image
Line 122: "<literal>Mult, Gamma</literal>" ---> =
"<literal>Mult:</literal>, <literal>Gamma:</literal>"
See next lines too
Line 106: "energy. hemicubes" ---> "energy. Hemicubes"
Line 116: "met" --> "meet" (?)
Line 123: start with upper case, if ok see lines 114 and 103 too
Line 144: "value in is divided" --> "value is divided" ("in input" ??)
Line 144-145: please verify entire phrase!!
Line 180: "bigger than the others" --> "bigger than the others meshes" =
(?) or simply "bigger"
Baldo