[Bf-docboard] Errata 9

BALDASSARRE CESARANO bf-docboard@blender.org
Wed, 7 Jul 2004 09:47:28 +0200


-- section_output_formats.xml  ---=20
	At end: AVI Raw...AVI Jpeg...AVI Codec... ? "QuickTime - saves a =
QuickTime animation"? Missing ??

-- section_depth_of_focus.xml --
	Name of xml is "rendering_depth_of_field", Name of section "Depth of =
Field" ???=20
	Paragraph after figure 26: "(CTRL+P) THe " ---> "(CTRL-P). The " (3 =
errors: "-", ".", "h")
	next paragraph: "CTRL+LMB" --> "CTRL-LMB"

-- section_video.xml --
	First paragraph: "on the internet" ---> "on the Internet"
	after formulas: "the Human eye" ---> "the human eye"
	same paragraph: "...the former is sent with more bits than the two =
latter." ---> Please change the phrase! "the former??", "the two =
latter???"

-- section_blender_radiosity.xml --
	Line 94, Item "Progressive Refinement": "Patchnow having" --> "Patch =
now having" (space)

-- section_radiosity_quickstart.xml --
	Caption of figure 3 without full stop (".")
	Cfr Line 30 and 32: <'Emit'> --- <"Emit"> (single or double )
	line 80-81 insert a space after in line image
	Line 122: "<literal>Mult, Gamma</literal>" ---> =
"<literal>Mult:</literal>, <literal>Gamma:</literal>"
		See next lines too
	Line 106: "energy. hemicubes" ---> "energy. Hemicubes"
	Line 116: "met" --> "meet" (?)
	Line 123: start with upper case, if ok see lines 114 and 103 too
	Line 144: "value in is divided" --> "value is divided" ("in input" ??)
		Line 144-145: please verify entire phrase!!
	Line 180: "bigger than the others" --> "bigger than the others meshes" =
(?) or simply "bigger"

Baldo