[Bf-docboard] Errata 29

BALDASSARRE CESARANO Baldassarre.Cesarano at getronics.com
Tue Aug 31 11:33:35 CEST 2004


-- section_buttons_window.xml --
	Line 4: "ButtonsHeader" --> "Buttons Toolbar"  (See other sections)
	Line 109: "Horizontally" --> "horizontally"
	Line 134: ":" --> " the " (?)
	Line 151: "HOMEKEY" --> "HOME"

-- section_logic_context.xml --

	*** THE FILE IS NOT UPDATED *****

	Linea 7 and 19:  "gameEngine" --> "Game Engine" or "GameEngine"
	Lines 22-23, 52-53: <para></para> (?)
	Line 47: "forming a level" ? (Please change)
	Line 76: "actuators" --> "controllers"
	Line 78: "python" --> "Python"

-- section_scriptlink_context.xml --
	Line 6: "ScriptButtons" --> "Script Buttons"
	Line 7: "window" --> "Window"
	Line 7: "called" --> "executed" ?
	Line 20: append ":"
	Line 101: "Alt-P" --> "ALT-P" in keycap
	Line 137: "ie." --> "i.e."

-- section_shading_context.xml --
	Lines 72-3: "<emphasis>directional</emphasis><emphasis> ambient</emphasis>" --> "<emphasis>directional ambient</emphasis>" (?)
	Lines 239-40: Now not (more) true
	Lines 285-6: "shadow lamp beams" ? (not clear)
	Line 359: Not clear id the square is 3*3, 4*4... or if the test is performed 9, 16... times!
	Line 672: "left" --> "right of Panel" (?)
	Line 710: "Ipo"--> "IPO"
	Line 849: "Mesh vertex" --> "Mesh vertices" ???
	Line 848: "Vertex Paint" as a clickable link
	Line 876: "Three" --> "three"
	Line 932: "Num Buttons" --> "sliders"
	Lines 1003, 1012, 1015, 1024, 1027, 1031: append a dot
	Lines 1050, 1065, 1080, 1100, 1103, 1107: append a dot
	Line 1167: "both" --> "Both"
	Line 1185: "castshadows" --> "cast shadows" ?
	Line 1258: ...is the Zbuffer take the halo into account (?)
	Lines 1289-91: Not clear! 
			1) the image (buttonpanel10.png) not show 3 buttons on the top-left and 2 on then bottom.
			2) Please change ...loose...keep (?)
	Line 1328: "Ring" --> "rin	g" (compare with line 1321)
	Line 1333: "Num Buttons" --> "sliders"
	Line 1385: insert a space after ","
	Line 1408: "toggle button" --> "Toggle Button"

	Line 1568: Memo: Add to glossary "PUNO"
	Line 1606: "Input" --> "input" or "output" --> "Output"
	Line 1778: please verify "specially"
	Line 1811: substitute last "," with "."
	Lines 1831, 1842, 1957, 2003: remove dot (no in title!)
	Line 2060: "wit " --> "with "
	Lines 2215-6: Please change ("described"..."description")
	Line 2216: append a dot
	Line 2272: "LeftMouse" --> "LMB"

	... Memo: In the glossary insert "Colorband" as synonym of (or like a) "color palette" ?

	Line 2319: "twoadditional" --> "two additional"
	Lines 2325-2387: The texture names of textures in literal or emphasis
	Line 2351: "alphalayer" --> "alpha layer" (I not sure for 'layer' in emphasis !)
	Line 2379: "line" --> "lines" (?)
	Line 2395: replace "," with " and "
	Line 2397: append a ", "
	Line 2460: The title is empty (1 space!)
	Line 2732: "procedural texture" in literal, "Magic" quoted (see other items)
	Line 2811: " are" --> ", they are" (?)
	Line 2842: "notonly" --> "not only"
	Line 2847-9: Please review phrase!
	Line 2933: "is" --> "if"
	Line 2942: "rendring" --> "rendering"
	Line 3173: "Renderingand" --> "Rendering and"
	Line 3174: "radio" --> "Radio" ?

	MEMO: in the glossary "Patch", "Element" and "colorspace"
	
	Line 3239: Remove space before dot
	Line 3382: "mousecursor" --> "mouse cursor"
	Line 3383: Please review phrase (Replace "," with "and" ?)
	Line 3392: "elements" --> "Elements"
	Line 3450: "elements" --> "Elements"
	Line 3457: Please change: "shoot of Patches" or "shooting Patches"
	Line 3628: "earth" --> "Earth"
	Line 3491: please change ... "zenith above" --> "above the zenit"? (see also line 3497)

-- section_object_context.xml --
	Line 89: "Parents" --> "Parent" (1 Parent many kildrens!)
	Lines 97 and 823: "Ipo" --> "IPO"
	Line 98: "3Dwindow" --> "3DWindow"
	Line 145: "Object" --> "Objects"
	Line 213: "which is" --> "which are"

Baldo



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