[Bf-docboard] Errata 29
BALDASSARRE CESARANO
Baldassarre.Cesarano at getronics.com
Tue Aug 31 11:33:35 CEST 2004
-- section_buttons_window.xml --
Line 4: "ButtonsHeader" --> "Buttons Toolbar" (See other sections)
Line 109: "Horizontally" --> "horizontally"
Line 134: ":" --> " the " (?)
Line 151: "HOMEKEY" --> "HOME"
-- section_logic_context.xml --
*** THE FILE IS NOT UPDATED *****
Linea 7 and 19: "gameEngine" --> "Game Engine" or "GameEngine"
Lines 22-23, 52-53: <para></para> (?)
Line 47: "forming a level" ? (Please change)
Line 76: "actuators" --> "controllers"
Line 78: "python" --> "Python"
-- section_scriptlink_context.xml --
Line 6: "ScriptButtons" --> "Script Buttons"
Line 7: "window" --> "Window"
Line 7: "called" --> "executed" ?
Line 20: append ":"
Line 101: "Alt-P" --> "ALT-P" in keycap
Line 137: "ie." --> "i.e."
-- section_shading_context.xml --
Lines 72-3: "<emphasis>directional</emphasis><emphasis> ambient</emphasis>" --> "<emphasis>directional ambient</emphasis>" (?)
Lines 239-40: Now not (more) true
Lines 285-6: "shadow lamp beams" ? (not clear)
Line 359: Not clear id the square is 3*3, 4*4... or if the test is performed 9, 16... times!
Line 672: "left" --> "right of Panel" (?)
Line 710: "Ipo"--> "IPO"
Line 849: "Mesh vertex" --> "Mesh vertices" ???
Line 848: "Vertex Paint" as a clickable link
Line 876: "Three" --> "three"
Line 932: "Num Buttons" --> "sliders"
Lines 1003, 1012, 1015, 1024, 1027, 1031: append a dot
Lines 1050, 1065, 1080, 1100, 1103, 1107: append a dot
Line 1167: "both" --> "Both"
Line 1185: "castshadows" --> "cast shadows" ?
Line 1258: ...is the Zbuffer take the halo into account (?)
Lines 1289-91: Not clear!
1) the image (buttonpanel10.png) not show 3 buttons on the top-left and 2 on then bottom.
2) Please change ...loose...keep (?)
Line 1328: "Ring" --> "rin g" (compare with line 1321)
Line 1333: "Num Buttons" --> "sliders"
Line 1385: insert a space after ","
Line 1408: "toggle button" --> "Toggle Button"
Line 1568: Memo: Add to glossary "PUNO"
Line 1606: "Input" --> "input" or "output" --> "Output"
Line 1778: please verify "specially"
Line 1811: substitute last "," with "."
Lines 1831, 1842, 1957, 2003: remove dot (no in title!)
Line 2060: "wit " --> "with "
Lines 2215-6: Please change ("described"..."description")
Line 2216: append a dot
Line 2272: "LeftMouse" --> "LMB"
... Memo: In the glossary insert "Colorband" as synonym of (or like a) "color palette" ?
Line 2319: "twoadditional" --> "two additional"
Lines 2325-2387: The texture names of textures in literal or emphasis
Line 2351: "alphalayer" --> "alpha layer" (I not sure for 'layer' in emphasis !)
Line 2379: "line" --> "lines" (?)
Line 2395: replace "," with " and "
Line 2397: append a ", "
Line 2460: The title is empty (1 space!)
Line 2732: "procedural texture" in literal, "Magic" quoted (see other items)
Line 2811: " are" --> ", they are" (?)
Line 2842: "notonly" --> "not only"
Line 2847-9: Please review phrase!
Line 2933: "is" --> "if"
Line 2942: "rendring" --> "rendering"
Line 3173: "Renderingand" --> "Rendering and"
Line 3174: "radio" --> "Radio" ?
MEMO: in the glossary "Patch", "Element" and "colorspace"
Line 3239: Remove space before dot
Line 3382: "mousecursor" --> "mouse cursor"
Line 3383: Please review phrase (Replace "," with "and" ?)
Line 3392: "elements" --> "Elements"
Line 3450: "elements" --> "Elements"
Line 3457: Please change: "shoot of Patches" or "shooting Patches"
Line 3628: "earth" --> "Earth"
Line 3491: please change ... "zenith above" --> "above the zenit"? (see also line 3497)
-- section_object_context.xml --
Line 89: "Parents" --> "Parent" (1 Parent many kildrens!)
Lines 97 and 823: "Ipo" --> "IPO"
Line 98: "3Dwindow" --> "3DWindow"
Line 145: "Object" --> "Objects"
Line 213: "which is" --> "which are"
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