[Bf-docboard] Errata 24
BALDASSARRE CESARANO
bf-docboard@blender.org
Wed Aug 11 19:01:16 CEST 2004
-- book_infoI.xml (and book_infoII.xml) --
Line 126: "2002" --> "2004" (!)
Line 128; "Stichting" ???????? "Stit..." ???
-- chapter_tex_seq_plugins.xml --
Line 350-351: modify ">" and "<"
Line 539: start with uper case "The"
Line 550: ".c file." --> ".c file," (comma)
Line 651: "sinus.c Open" --> "sinus.c. Open" (dot)
Line 656: "<literal></literal>" (??)
Line 841: "plugin texture is copied" --> "plugin sequence is copied"
Line 1088-9: out of screen tag or commented /*...*/
Line 1088: "silder" --> "slider"
Line 1089: "folowing" --> "following"
Line 1101-3: out of screen tag or commented /*...*/
-- section_uv_textures.xml --
Line 68 (?): "aave" --> "have" (?)
-- section_uv_unwrapping.xml --
Line 291-2: Bracket not closed... "("....?
Line 343: "misteries" --> "Mysteries" (?)
Line 369: "wierd" ???
-- chapter_yable.xml --
Line 35: ". As" --> " as"
Line 58: "section: : http" --> "section: http"
Line 108: "Yable headerGeneral Setting Buttons." --> "Global Settings =
Buttons." (see figure!)
Line 158: append a dot
Line 260 abd 262: "<literal>Use Background</literal> color" --> =
"<literal>Use Back Ground Color</literal> "
Line 268: "hemi and path" --> "Hemi and path"
Line 289: "hemi" --> "Hemi"
Line 290: "increase vary much" (???)
Line 368: "Num Button" --> "slider" (see figure)
Line 446: "Buttons" --> "Button"
Line 465: "formats:320" --> "formats: 320" (space)
Lines 496-6: "View Output" in literal
Line 503: "Layers" in literal
Line 555: "fist" --> "first"
Line 560: "datas" --> "data" (?)
Line 608: first "CPU" in literal
Line 631: remove ";" (?)
Line 632: insert a space before "("
Line 657: "material" --> "shader" ???
Line 698: "Bl" in literal
Line 698: remove space after "Add Specular Color" (join with next row)
Line 709: "Num Buttons" ??? "Sliders" (?)
Line 714: "Transmit" in literal or emphasis
Line 721: "Num Buttons" ??? "Sliders" (?)
Line 761: "20C" --> "20=B0C"
Line 841: "Others" in literal
Line 882: append a dot (?-see next line)
Line 888: please change the phrase
Line 883: no sense! Please change
Line 911: "Selected All" --> "Assign All" in literal (? see figure)
Line 938: replace ";" with "," and append a ","
Line 941: "Diffuse" and "Caustic" in literal
Line 960: first "light" --> "Light"
Line 1011: "Pointlight" --> "Point light" (?)
Line 1046: "Photonlight" --> "Photon light"
Line 1061: "diffusive" ???
Line 1091: "Photonlight" --> "Photon light"
Line 1095: space before "assigning"
Line 1094-5: Please change phrase ("at least"..."at least")
Line 1110: "color ) --> "color) (remove space)
Line 1136: "quasi" --> "Quasi"
Line 1161: remove "(" and ")"
Line 1162: "ic" ???
Line 1202-3: ... dedication and tanks in respective parts of the book!
-- chapter_yafray.xml --
In ALL text: "blender" --> "Blender"
Lines 5: author repeated! (compare with lines 17-18)
Line 18: remove ","
Line 35: "hemilight" --> "Hemi Light"
Line 43: "mosix" --> "Mosix"
Line 73: "python" --> "Python"
Line 84: "global illumination" --> "Global Illumination"
...Lines 10-98: No technical data... only thanks!
Line 120: "cygwin" --> "Cygwin"
Line 150: "stuffIt" --> "StuffIt"
Line 167: remove space after first "'" (2 times)
Line 167: remove space before "."
-- section_yafray_shaders.xml --
Line 122: "color1" ---> "color 1"
Line 388: "coords" --> "Coords"
Line 613: "x2" --> "2"
-- section_yafray_objects.xml --
Line 47: "Transform" in lower case and in literal
Line 55: "object" in lower case and in literal
Line 101: "Mesh" in lower case and in literal
-- section_yafray_lights.xml --
Lines 50 and 221 : "shadowmap"--> "shadow map"
Line 56: append a dot
Line 68: "res" in literal (?)
Line 286: append a dot
Line 319: "yafray" ---> "YafRay"
Line 365: "quasi montecarlo" --> "Quasi Monte Carlo"
Line 371: "on" --> "'on'" (see previous item)
Line 393-4: Please review the phrase (...an object can be?)
Line 473: "yafray" ---> "YafRay"
Line 509: "quasi montecarlo" --> "Quasi Monte Carlo"
Line 589: "higher" --> "Higher"
Line 597: Insert a ")" before final dot.
Line 610-1: "quasi montecarlo" --> "Quasi Monte Carlo"
Line 658: "photons" --> "Photons"
Lines 668-675: search, fixed radius and cluster in literal
Line 687: remove space before dot =20
Line 689: "large" --> "Large"=20
Line 690: "fixed radius" --> "fixed_radius" (underscore)
Line 691: please review the phrase 2 braket opened!
Line 703: Append a dot
-- section_yafray_background.xml --
Line 120-1: "g - green" --> "b - blue"
Line 121: insert a comma (?) as separator (r - ..., g - ...., b - ...)
-- section_yafray_render.xml --
Line 78: "'Camera'" --> "camera" and in literal
Line 137: "1 to 2" --> "1.0 to 2.0"
Line 197: append a dot
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