[Bf-docboard] Errata 24

BALDASSARRE CESARANO bf-docboard@blender.org
Wed Aug 11 19:01:16 CEST 2004


-- book_infoI.xml (and book_infoII.xml) --
	Line 126: "2002" --> "2004" (!)
	Line 128; "Stichting" ???????? "Stit..." ???

-- chapter_tex_seq_plugins.xml --
	Line 350-351: modify ">" and "<"
	Line 539: start with uper case "The"
	Line 550: ".c file." --> ".c file," (comma)
	Line 651: "sinus.c Open" --> "sinus.c. Open" (dot)
	Line 656: "<literal></literal>" (??)
	Line 841: "plugin texture is copied" --> "plugin sequence is copied"
	Line 1088-9: out of screen tag or commented /*...*/
	Line 1088: "silder" --> "slider"
	Line 1089: "folowing" --> "following"
	Line 1101-3: out of screen tag or commented /*...*/



-- section_uv_textures.xml --
	Line 68 (?): "aave" --> "have" (?)

-- section_uv_unwrapping.xml --
	Line 291-2: Bracket not closed... "("....?
	Line 343: "misteries" --> "Mysteries" (?)
	Line 369: "wierd" ???



-- chapter_yable.xml --
	Line 35: ". As" --> " as"
	Line 58: "section: : http" --> "section: http"
	Line 108: "Yable headerGeneral Setting Buttons." --> "Global Settings =
Buttons." (see figure!)
	Line 158: append a dot
	Line 260 abd 262: "<literal>Use Background</literal> color" --> =
"<literal>Use Back Ground Color</literal> "
	Line 268: "hemi and path" --> "Hemi and path"
	Line 289: "hemi" --> "Hemi"
	Line 290: "increase vary much" (???)
	Line 368: "Num Button" --> "slider" (see figure)
	Line 446: "Buttons" --> "Button"
	Line 465: "formats:320" --> "formats: 320" (space)
	Lines 496-6: "View Output" in literal
	Line 503: "Layers" in literal
	Line 555: "fist" --> "first"
	Line 560: "datas" --> "data" (?)
	Line 608: first "CPU" in literal
	Line 631: remove ";" (?)
	Line 632: insert a space before "("
	Line 657: "material" --> "shader" ???
	Line 698: "Bl" in literal
	Line 698: remove space after "Add Specular Color" (join with next row)
	Line 709: "Num Buttons"	 ??? "Sliders" (?)
	Line 714: "Transmit" in literal or emphasis
	Line 721: "Num Buttons"	 ??? "Sliders" (?)
	Line 761: "20C" --> "20=B0C"
	Line 841: "Others" in literal
	Line 882: append a dot (?-see next line)
	Line 888: please change the phrase
	Line 883: no sense! Please change
	Line 911: "Selected All" --> "Assign All" in literal (? see figure)
	Line 938: replace ";" with "," and append a ","
	Line 941: "Diffuse" and "Caustic" in literal
	Line 960: first "light" --> "Light"
	Line 1011: "Pointlight" --> "Point light" (?)
	Line 1046: "Photonlight" --> "Photon light"
	Line 1061: "diffusive" ???
	Line 1091: "Photonlight" --> "Photon light"
	Line 1095: space before "assigning"
	Line 1094-5: Please change phrase ("at least"..."at least")
	Line 1110: "color ) --> "color) (remove space)
	Line 1136: "quasi" --> "Quasi"
	Line 1161: remove "(" and ")"
	Line 1162: "ic" ???
	Line 1202-3: ... dedication and tanks in respective parts of the book!

-- chapter_yafray.xml --

	In ALL text: "blender" --> "Blender"

	Lines 5: author repeated! (compare with lines 17-18)
	Line 18: remove ","
	Line 35: "hemilight" --> "Hemi Light"
	Line 43: "mosix" --> "Mosix"
	Line 73: "python" --> "Python"
	Line 84: "global illumination" --> "Global Illumination"
	...Lines 10-98: No technical data... only thanks!
	Line 120: "cygwin" --> "Cygwin"
	Line 150: "stuffIt" --> "StuffIt"
	Line 167: remove space after first "'" (2 times)
	Line 167: remove space before "."

-- section_yafray_shaders.xml --
	Line 122: "color1" ---> "color 1"
	Line 388: "coords" --> "Coords"
	Line 613: "x2" --> "2"

-- section_yafray_objects.xml --
	Line 47: "Transform" in lower case and in literal
	Line 55: "object" in lower case and in literal
	Line 101: "Mesh" in lower case and in literal

-- section_yafray_lights.xml --
	Lines 50 and 221 : "shadowmap"--> "shadow map"
	Line 56: append a dot
	Line 68: "res" in literal (?)
	Line 286: append a dot
	Line 319: "yafray" ---> "YafRay"
	Line 365: "quasi montecarlo" --> "Quasi Monte Carlo"
	Line 371: "on" --> "'on'" (see previous item)
	Line 393-4: Please review the phrase (...an object can be?)
	Line 473: "yafray" ---> "YafRay"
	Line 509: "quasi montecarlo" --> "Quasi Monte Carlo"
	Line 589: "higher" --> "Higher"
	Line 597: Insert a ")" before final dot.
	Line 610-1: "quasi montecarlo" --> "Quasi Monte Carlo"
	Line 658: "photons" --> "Photons"
	Lines 668-675: search, fixed radius and cluster in literal
	Line 687: remove space before dot                        =20
	Line 689: "large" --> "Large"=20
	Line 690: "fixed radius" --> "fixed_radius" (underscore)
	Line 691: please review the phrase 2 braket opened!
	Line 703: Append a dot

-- section_yafray_background.xml --
	Line 120-1: "g - green" --> "b - blue"
	Line 121: insert a comma (?) as separator (r - ..., g - ...., b - ...)

-- section_yafray_render.xml --
	Line 78: "'Camera'" --> "camera" and in literal
	Line 137: "1 to 2" --> "1.0 to 2.0"
	Line 197: append a dot





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