[Bf-docboard] [text proposal] Paragraphs on Open Source

[Rik Panero]

Fascinating, but just a few things I saw while reading:


>In the good old days computers where chunky big things that needed a

were, not where

>good deal of experise to use. This information was very hard to come by

expertise, not experise

>There has been a lot of powerful pointing at
>suits and journalists since then and now "Open Source" is perceived by
>those who matter as the technically excellent not-for-profit anomaly
>that can magically reduce the TCO of a company's IT operations.

Two possible meanings, so clarify "then and now" with commas:  is it
"pointing at suits and journalists since then, and now "Open Source" is"
  or "pointing at suits and journalists since, then and now, "Open Source" is"


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