[Uni-verse] Press release

[Gert Svensson]

Peter and others,

thanks for the comments and suggestions!
I have made what I regard  the final version which is attached.

Best regards
Gert

Peter Becker, II wrote:
> Hi
>
> enclosed a suggestion for a revised press release
>
> Peter
>
>
> Gert Svensson wrote:
>
>>
>> Dear Tapio,
>>
>> thanks for the comments. See below.
>>
>> Best Regards
>> Gert
>> Tapio Lokki wrote:
>>
>>> On Wed, 15 Nov 2006, Gert Svensson wrote:
>>>
>>>> Dear Friends,
>>>> this is the first version of a press release we could bring to the 
>>>> IST event.
>>>> I'm working with the KTH press service for a more popular Swedish 
>>>> version (and possibly English as well).
>>>> Please comment!
>>>
>>>
>>> Dear all,
>>>
>>> The press release looks nice. However, a few comments:
>>>
>>> 1. I'd like to change the title so that it does not contain word 
>>> "breakthrough", since with my academic glasses I see it too strong. 
>>> How about "Novel distributed acoustic simulation tools for 
>>> architecture and games".
>>
>> I can understand your concern but in press releases it is "normal" to 
>> exaggerate. Has something similar been done before?
>>
>>>
>>> 2. When audio waves bend around obstacles the phenomenon is called 
>>> diffraction, not refraction (as now in the end of 3. paragraph).
>>
>> Sorry, my fault  So the statement will be correct if I change 
>> refraction to diffraction?
>>
>>>
>>> 3. In the end, list of project partners: "Helsinki Technical 
>>> University" does not exist, instead "Helsinki University of 
>>> Technology" has been our name since 1908 :-)
>>
>> Sorry again. I have changed that.
>>
>> An updated version is attached.
>>
>>
>> Best Regards
>> Gert
>>
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