<div dir="ltr"><div><div><div>Hi Polo!<br><br></div>No probs- I will edit the pages in the next two weeks, so that you can see them when you are free.<br></div>BTW I haven't used a sandbox, and have posted a question at docboard about that. <br>
</div>(This is not mentioned in the wiki writers' guide at all.)<br><div><br>Can you help me with that?<br><br></div><div>Thanks in advance!<br></div><div><div>Narayan<br></div><div><br></div></div></div><div class="gmail_extra">
<br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Thu, Jun 6, 2013 at 4:24 AM, Polosson <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:polo@citadelrock.fr" target="_blank">polo@citadelrock.fr</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<div>Hi Narayan !<br>
And thank you again for your detailed review and advices.<br>
<br>
First of all, I don't consider this as "my" pages <span><span> ;-) </span></span><br>
<span lang="en"><span>Moreover,</span> <span>you seem </span></span><span lang="en"><span>to</span>
<span>be aware</span> <span>of the
Convention, more than I am.</span></span><br>
<span lang="en"><span>And, I </span></span><span lang="en"><span>soon</span>
<span>would no longer</span> have free <span>time</span></span>
to continue to refine this...<span lang="en"><span> Anyway, </span></span><span lang="en"><span>I can no
longer</span> <span>continue for</span> <span>at least two weeks</span></span>, from tomorrow.<br>
<br>
So if you (or somebody else) <span lang="en"><span><span lang="en"><span>are</span> <span>willing to help
me and continue, please</span></span></span><span>
do</span> <span>so</span><span>!</span></span><span lang="en"><span></span></span>
I "spend hand" on those pages. And, don't hesitate to move /
rename / delete what you think must be.<br>
In 2 weeks, I'll check if <span lang="en"><span>someone</span> <span>has
done the work</span> <span>that you have</span> <span>specified in this mail, and try to do my best if
nothing happened.</span></span><br>
<br>
Cheers !<br>
.Polo<br>
<br>
<br>
Le 05/06/2013 20:21, Raindrops From Sky a écrit :<br>
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<div>Hi,<br>
<br>
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This version has come out nicely.<br>
<br>
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<div>A tip: When you are already providing an image, then
it is best to annotate it with marker numbers and then
refer to those numbers in the text. <br>
If necessary, use a rectangle/oval overlay to highlight
a specific control (or region of interest) in the GUI.<br>
<br>
Then you will not have to say "The upper-left window
pane is the <span>Graph Editor</span>, the
upper-right window pane is the....".</div>
<div>(If you were presenting a ppt, would you talk like
that? of course not- You would use a laser pointer and
point at specific areas...)<br>
</div>
<div><br>
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<div>Your page names and headings do not match with the
convention followed by the wiki.<br>
<br>
First of all, the contents of the <a href="http://wiki.blender.org/index.php/Meta:Sanbox/Doc:2.6/Manual/Sequencer" target="_blank">http://wiki.blender.org/index.php/Meta:Sanbox/Doc:2.6/Manual/Sequencer</a>
page will go to the main index page:<br>
<a href="http://wiki.blender.org/index.php/Doc:2.6/Manual#Editing_Sequences" target="_blank">http://wiki.blender.org/index.php/Doc:2.6/Manual#Editing_Sequences</a><br>
<br>
</div>
<div>Thereafter, all your pages will get called from the
manual's main index page. <br>
So the <a href="http://wiki.blender.org/index.php/Meta:Sanbox/Doc:2.6/Manual/Sequencer" target="_blank">http://wiki.blender.org/index.php/Meta:Sanbox/Doc:2.6/Manual/Sequencer</a>
page would be retired (not needed; redundant).<br>
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<div>
<br>
*****<br>
</div>
I will provide two examples of how to change the banner
(text in orange band at the top of page). <br>
Apply the same method to the other pages also.<br>
</div>
<div><br>
First example: page
Doc:2.6/Manual/Sequencer/Intro/Introduction.<br>
<br>
</div>
<div>Change its banner to "Doc:2.6/Manual/<span>Video Sequence Editor</span>"<br>
Reason: The intro pages are not called "introduction", but
named after the main topic.<br>
<br>
</div>
<div>Change the first heading on the page<span>
"Introduction to video editing in Blender" to simply "</span><span>Introduction"
(h1 format).<br>
----</span><br>
<span>A second
example: The Doc:2.6/Manual/Sequencer/Strips/Types page-<br>
<br>
Change the banner from
"Doc:2.6/Manual/Sequencer/Strips/Types" to
"Doc:2.6/Manual/Sequencer/Strips/Introduction".<br>
Change the title "<span>Strips definition and
type" to "Introduction". </span><br>
</span></div>
<div><span><br>
****</span><br>
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<span></span>
<div><span>The
overview page should cover the display modes, because it
accomplishes different tasks in each mode.<br>
</span></div>
<div><span>BTW the
screenshot of each mode should show the entire VSE, not just
its header (which does not explain what that mode is for).<br>
</span></div>
<div>
<div>
<div>Explain the main purpose of each mode, and explain how
the GUI helps achieve that.<br>
<br>
</div>
<div>Then the next page will only have a brief explanation
about the workflow (important!) which modes to use to
achieve that workflow.<br>
<br>
</div>
<div>Therefore this section ("View") should be renamed
"Working with VSE".<br>
<br>
*****<br>
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<div><br>
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<div><br>
</div>
<div>Regards,<br>
</div>
<div>Narayan<br>
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<div class="gmail_quote">On Wed, Jun 5, 2013 at 9:30 PM,
Polosson <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:polo@citadelrock.fr" target="_blank">polo@citadelrock.fr</a>></span>
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<div bgcolor="#FFFFFF" text="#000000"> Hi all !<br>
<br>
I finally finished the new structure / complete update of
the 2.6 VSE chapter.<br>
<br>
I need someone to tell me: <i>"OK, you can move this from
the sandbox to the Doc:2.6 pages"</i>, or <i>"no way,
your work sucks"</i>... :P<br>
<br>
BTW, here is the "index" page I created for it in the
sandbox: <a href="http://wiki.blender.org/index.php/Meta:Sanbox/Doc:2.6/Manual/Sequencer" target="_blank">http://wiki.blender.org/index.php/Meta:Sanbox/Doc:2.6/Manual/Sequencer</a><br>
Note that the links inside are pointing to the final
page's destinations (i.e. Doc2.6)<br>
<br>
A question anyway, concerning the "tree view" in the left
panel of the wiki... How to update it ? It'd be better if
this tree would be the same as the "index" page I
created...<br>
<br>
All critiques and remarks are welcome... And since <span lang="en"><span>I </span></span><span lang="en"><span>soon</span>
<span>would no longer</span> have <span>time to</span>
<span>take care</span></span> about that, everyone can
update / change / correct it !<br>
<br>
Thanks !<br>
.Polo<span><font color="#888888"><br>
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