[Bf-docboard] Errata Corrige 2005-09-02

[Baldassarre Cesarano]

-- section_materials_ray_trans.xml --

 

Line 16: "Render Panel"  --> "<literal>Render</literal> Panel"

             "Scene buttons" --> "<literal>Scene</literal> buttons"

Line 17: "Ray button" --> "<literal>Ray</literal> button"

Line 32: "non transparent" --> "non-transparent"

Line 35: "Alpha value" --> "<literal>Alpha</literal> value"

Lines 21, 47, 120: section tag without id

Line 52: "Ray Transp button"       --> "<literal>Ray Transp</literal>
button"

             "The Figure <xref" --> REMOVE "Figure ". It is inserted by
docbook system!

Line 58: "Alpha value"     --> "<literal>Alpha</literal> value"

            : "to set the Alpha value of the Material to a value" --> please
change (value..value) may be "to lower the Alpha value below..."

 

 

Line 60: "Chapter 10" --> subst as '<xref linkend="chapter_materials" />'
(please verify)

 

Line 65: append a dot to image title

Line 74: "travelling" ---> my be "to go through"

Line 84: "Depth" --> "<literal>Depth</literal>"

Line 85: "Depth" --> "<literal>Depth</literal>"

Line 87: "Depth" --> "<literal>Depth</literal>"

Line 92: append a dot to image title

 

Lines 101-117: This piece is the same (alreade discussed) in
section_materials_ray_mir.xml. My be a bad cut/paste

 

Line 121: "< transparent >" --> "<transparent>" or in emphasis

Line 132: "< transparent >" --> "<transparent>" or in emphasis

Line 133: "Shading" "<literal>Shading</literal>"

Line 134: "F5" --> "<keycap>F5</keycap>"

Line 134: "Shaders Panel" --> "<literal>Shaders</literal> Panel"

Line 134: "TraShado" (button) --> <literal>TraShado</literal>

Line 135: "The Figure <xref" --> REMOVE "Figure". It is inserted by docbook
system!

Line 136: "lighter" ??? may be "lighten" ???

Line 136: "Alpha" (value) --> <literal>Alpha</literal>

Line 141: remove space before "Casting"

Line 141: "< transparent >" --> "<transparent>" or in emphasis

Line 141: append a dot to image title

 

 

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