[Bf-docboard] Errata 34

[Stefano Selleri]

Baldo,

JK has changed a wrong owner of the particles directory... you should be
able to get it now

I'm ra bit worried. NOONE except me and Eric could access that directory..
and only Baldo realized the problem... perhaps it is just three of us using
the CVS :) ?

Stefano

----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Cesarano, Baldassarre" <Baldassarre.Cesarano at getronics.com>
To: <bf-docboard at projects.blender.org>
Sent: Friday, September 10, 2004 11:39 AM
Subject: [Bf-docboard] Errata 34


> -- appendix_licenses.xml --
> Line 26: "This Style Guide" ?? (Style?)
> Line 137: append a dot
> Line 155: "Herebelow" --> "Here below"
> Line 641: missing "END OF TERMS AND CONDITIONS"
>
> -- appendix_documentation_project.xml --
> Line 22: "blender" --> "Blender"
>
> -- section_docbook_learning.xml --
> Line 8: remove ", available on-line"
> Lines 106, 107, 110: append a dot
> Lines 111-2: start comment with uppercase
> Line 137: Insert a dot before " For"
> Line 141: first "SYSTEM" in computeroutput or emphasys or...?
> Line 192: "tell a reader" is correct ?
> Line 193-5: ... some punctuation please!
> Line 217: "Manual documentation" one superfluous
> Line 260: Please confirm the phrase ("the reader"..."they")
> Line 340: "Failure to include this slash" --> "Missing this slash" ???
> Line 535: Please review ("mentioned"..."mentioned"
> Line 610: "warning" --> "Warning" (see next "Note")
>
> -- world_ambient_occlusion.xml --
> (lines can be shifted: I have correte version 1.3 first)
> Line 28: Please verify (not a pixel (2D on the screen) but a point (3D)!)
> Line 34: "on the" --> "on, the" (comma)
> Line 73: Remove space before  "The"
> Line 123: "AngMap" ??? Where is described!
> Line 131: "Horizon" --> "horizon"
> Lines 131-3: all colors in same case! See "orange" in line 133!
> Line 151: "Slider" --> "slider" ?
> Line 152: "a hemisphere" --> "the hemisphere" ???
> Line 153: remove last dot
> Line 169: "Octree" ???? Where is the description?????
> Line 170: transform in link "Rendering Chapter"
>
>
>
> Baldo
>
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