R: [Bf-docboard] CVS commit: BlenderManual2.32/PartM/textures/en section_displacement_maps.xml BlenderManual2.32/PartM/textures/gfx displacementMap.png displacementMap_DM_NOR.png displacementMap_dispDiff.png displacementMap_mapToPanel.png displacementMap0

[Cesarano, Baldassarre]

I have noted several regression in the file section_displacement_maps.xml :(

In the meantime...

-- chapter_integrated_yafray.xml --
	Lines 14, 199+200 : "with in" --> "within" (?)

	Line 118: "blender" --> "Blender"
	Line 123: ". (XML" --> " (xml"      (Button name), remove dot
	Line 152: "YFexport" in literal
	Line 153: "preferences" "of [user] preferences" (?)
	Line 181: "depending" --> "Depending" (?)
	Line 185: "thingy" ?
	Line 208-210: Please review phrase (objects...objects or some punctualization)
	Line 216: "elysiun" --> "<ulink url="http://www.elysiun.com/">www.elysiun.com</ulink>"
	Line 254: "ambiance" --> "ambience" (?may be environment light?)
	Line 257: "through out" --> "throughout"
	Line 299: ", Although" --> ". Although" (comma->dot)
	Line 347: "samples button" --> "<literal>samples</literal> button" (button name)
	Line 350: "lamp" --> "Lamp"  (light name)
	Line 351: "area light" --> "Area Light" (light name)

	Tip: Lines 347-351: another figure may be appropriate (Lamp button) and another paragraph starting at line 347 ("The use of ...").

	Lin 354: "removed" --> "remove"

	Tip: Lines 363-367: another figure may be appropriate (Area Light buttons).

	Line 370: "area light" --> "Area Light" (light name)
	Lines 378,379: "lamp" --> "Lamp"  (light name)
	Line 391: "Blender2.34" --> "Blender 2.34" (space)
	Line 391: "area light" --> "Area Light" (light name)
	Line 393: "some development builds" --> "major/successive(?) releases"

	Tip: At this point an image is required about Spot Buttons

	Line 399: "spot" --> "Spot" (light name)
	Lines 403-4: "area light" --> "Area Light" (light name)
	Line 408: "spot" --> "Spot" (light name)
	Line 424: "quad" same case of "Spherical" (Attenuation type name)
	Line 434: "blender" --> "Blender"
	Line 458: "sun" --> "Sun" (light name)
	Line 462: "sunlight" --> "Sun light"
	Line 472: "Blenders" --> "Blender's" (?)
	Line 474: "sun" --> "Sun" (light name)
	Lines 474-5: remove ", so you can use Sun light instead" 
	Line 480: Replace "*" with a reference/link to glossary (<glossentry id="Caustics">)
	Line 497: "have have" --> "have"
	Line 500: "photon" --> "Photon" 
	Line 505: ". Which" --Z "[,] which" (?)
	Line 518: Replace "*" with a reference/link to glossary (<glossentry id="GlobalIllumination">)
	Line 525: "both" (?)
	Line 553: "affect" --> "effect"
	Line 555: "effects" --> "affects"
	Line 567: remove "more" (?)
	Line 595: "full" --> "Full" (Method name)
	Line 611: "depth" in literal (please have in mind other languages!)
	Line 612: "depth" in literal
	Line 630: "photon" --> "Photons" (upper+plural)
	Line 632: "photon" --> "Photons" in literal (upper+plural)
	Line 641: "count" --> "Count:" in literal
	Lines 642-3: "...will will..."
	Line 653: "Idea" --> "idea"
	Line 655: ". Keep" --> "; keep"
	Line 664: "Mix Count" --> "MixCount" (space)
	Line 686: "quality" --> "Quality" in literal
	Lines 688-9: "samples used to sample" --> "samples used to test" (?)
	Lines 716-7: Please change ("every pass...for every pass")
	Line 729: "psz" --> "Psz"
	Line 729: "&gt;" --> "&lt;" (<..>)
	Line 730: "&gt;" after "</emphasis>"
	Line 731: please change ("...for aliasing" -> "for make/create/carry out the overlapping...") (?)
	Line 736: "pases" --> "passes"
	Line 750: "filter" --> "Field" (DoF=Dept of Field!)
	Line 752: remove "of filer "
	Line 754: "Camera" in literal (?)
	Line 755: "Camera" in literal (?)
	Line 760: "Aperture" in literal
	Line 842: "above. I" --> "above, I"
	Line 843: append nawani_g at yahoo.co.in (link to...)


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